Journey to the West: I Can Edit the Narration

Xianxia · Journey to the West Fan Fiction · System · Soul Transmigration

Li Lie wakes up one day to find that he has become the Third Prince of the West Sea Dragon Palace in the world of Journey to the West.

He says he does not want to be someone’s mount and eat grass every day.

Fortunately, he comes with a narration system. He thought it was a cheat ability, but it turns out the system only knows how to mock him.

[On the wedding night, Princess Wansheng gave up on your handsome appearance and took a liking to the ugly Jiutou Chong instead.]

[Your cultivation is inferior to Jiutou Chong’s, and you do not even have a weapon of your own. You cannot beat Jiutou Chong, who has the Crescent Blade Halberd. No, even if Jiutou Chong did not have a weapon, you still could not beat him.]

[You are furious and want to beat Jiutou Chong up, only to be beaten up by Jiutou Chong instead.]

[Princess Wansheng knows she is in the wrong, so she leaves with Jiutou Long.]

[You avoid a beating, but then give up on yourself and burn the luminous pearl bestowed by the Jade Emperor.]

Li Lie cannot help but complain: there is actually fire underwater, and the luminous pearl the Jade Emperor gave is that ordinary? It could be burned so easily.

With no other choice, Li Lie decides to change his fate himself and begins modifying the narration.

He writes: You are extraordinarily gifted and gain the recognition of the Ruyi Jingu Bang of the East Sea.

[Modification failed. The Jingu Bang has already recognized a master.]

Li Lie keeps modifying it.

[You work hard and tirelessly to cultivate the Samadhi True Fire, and it begins to show results.]

[You study diligently, your comprehension surges, and you successfully cultivate the Samadhi True Fire.]

Red Boy, you have the Samadhi True Fire, and so do I.